Beautiful, metaphysical poem, Stafford. The mix of art and cosmology and theology is wonderful, and very poignant.
stunning imagery,what an apt and fun read.
Interesting, and as usual so "right" there. I liked it very much. And I think you are right about the innocence, but only a very wise man would know this.
Another very interesting photo!
Lovely and bold at the same time. Great! :)
You have nailed me! Yes, I am an incorrigible flirt! But a ** very ** selective flirt ~ with rules and reasonable expectations.
"..held by a gravityWe don’t understand." Just one of the mysteries of mutual attraction. Nice one, Stafford.
and yet another beautiful poem!
Amazing imagery my friend, perfection for Potluck Poetry, thanks so very much for your support!! xx
oh this is really good. Great amplification of a moment
Yes, that is something we know...almost unpon meeting....nice Stafford...bkm
Insightful poem beautifully written ... just wonderful!steroids had me LOL!!! :o)
This was super neato!
true- very true what you just said--
I do really like this poem Stafford - its all about gravity isn't it?
magic is like thatbut is it real is the final questionnever asked..and probably doesn't have to be askedbeautiful quietromantic poem Stafford
Superb. The end of innocence... you create a very evocative image here in just a few words, and the final line kicked me right in the gut. Sign of a good poem. Word economy, imagery that elicits emotion. BravoWarmest SaladLuke
Ego Tripping So Easy*Electric Vibes*A Thrill For TwoForbidden FruitSo! What's The ProblemJust * Secret Moments*T'ween Them and YouOkay Till * Ego Tripping*Becomes * Addiction *And * SHALLOW * RulesThen All That * Zapping *And Secret MappingWith * OBSERVATION *Brings Pain To * FOOLS *
May the force be with you :)
Thank you so very much for your poetry potluck participation.BEST Wishes!
The sinners are much more fun...
Great one Stafford. You've def. captured the emotion.
Stafford, just a note to say, I'll be away for a while. I'll be in touch when I return. Hope all is well.
this is so true...Flirting feels just like this. touching just make you keep touching.. MOMENTUM..
You are a poet indeed Stafford...you have captured so much in few words as only poets can. Truly beautiful!!
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