Tuesday, 26 April 2011
Magical Magpie 63.
Magical tube for a mind to cope
With multiple images, colour and hope
For laughter and joy,
Child with a toy,
A cunningly fashioned kaleidoscope!
Colour and action from Tess at Magpie Tales.
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A lovely vision of hope for the future...bkm
ReplyDeleteThe definition of you ... young at heart!
ReplyDeleteThis is very well written Stafford - it rolls off the tongue and has an interesting enjambment not often seen in the form ;) I love kaleidoscopes.
ReplyDeleteAnd on another reading the enjambment has disappeared - magic (or could be I've been on holidays too long) :)
ReplyDeleteStafford,
ReplyDeleteHow easily we are distracted; thankfully.
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Nice rhyming and meter; good.
ReplyDeleteThis has a lovely rhythm to it :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a simple, musical gem; I think it touches on my first reaction to the prompt photo, lovely, but jarring to me in my ultra-quiet world. I didn't think I could "cope" with it. Thanks for your magical perception - and for visiting my place.
ReplyDeleteinstead of rose-coloured specs, perhaps we should all be fitted with your prescription?
ReplyDeletegreat poem
a fun bit of writing there....
ReplyDeleteWell done! I love a Kaleidoscope! Would spend hours looking at it at my Grandmothers.
ReplyDeleteCharming, fun. Thanks for the smile. =)
ReplyDeleteyou can be my kaleidoscope jingle man anytime :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful and full of joy.
ReplyDeleteAnd a cunningly fashioned poem, too. :)
ReplyDeletesuch a happy limerick! Cheers!
ReplyDeleteLovely and lyrical. Such a happy verse.
ReplyDeleteWhat nice cadence and rhyme. A paradigm shift of a different kind :o)
ReplyDeleteA lovely take on the prompt. :-)
ReplyDeleteYay!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Charming. Just like you, my friend.
ReplyDeleteHa! I was about to leave the exact comment I see from Jinksy!
ReplyDeletesweet!!
ReplyDeleteThis sings!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful Stafford! :-) Did you have a Kaleidoscope when you were a tike? :-)
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