Tuesday, 30 August 2011

Under the Gooseberry Bush.





















The Kiss.


Softest brush,
barely felt.
warm, dry,
inviting.


Then again,
open, wet.
Hot, sweet,
a promise.




In response to Gooseberry Bush Poetry.

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10 comments:

  1. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry30 August 2011 at 4:49 am

    actions speak louder.
    love the imagery your words painted.
    another gem entry.

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  2. Anonymous30 August 2011 at 5:33 am

    great work! thank you for sharing this ray. my entry: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/24/fluttering-in-an-envelope/

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  3. Marbles in My Pocket30 August 2011 at 6:33 am

    Beutiful! You captured the moment then owned it. Nicely done!

    My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/28/forever-changed-2/

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  4. Helen30 August 2011 at 8:45 am

    ... definitely too hot for me to handle!

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  5. Ann LeFlore30 August 2011 at 10:59 am

    Very nicely done. I am new to Gooseberry and I like it so much already. I have tried this challenge but you have done such a wonderful job.

    My entry http://gatelesspassage.com/

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  6. Windsmoke.30 August 2011 at 3:15 pm

    Well put indeed. There's nothing wrong with a French Kiss either :-).

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  7. kaykuala31 August 2011 at 4:22 am

    Stafford,
    Staccato bursts of gunfire in this. Great! The proof is in the eating!

    Hank

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  8. Anonymous31 August 2011 at 12:23 pm

    Ooh lala. Pass the smelling salts. :D

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  9. Fay5 September 2011 at 12:46 pm

    I've just fallen deeply in lust with you.

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