Saturday 27 August 2011

Bluebell Books Short Story 8

Love in a wheat field.




















My heart, my mind, my soul infuse
With sweetest love, my body use.
But ‘ere we lay
Here in the hay
Please help me find my effing shoes!

Prompt by Bluebell Books Short Story Slam.
(No time today to write a real story, maybe next time).
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14 comments:

  1. Martin27 August 2011 at 6:49 am

    As I remember, it wasn't always my shoes I was looking for!

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  2. Anonymous27 August 2011 at 9:10 am

    thought provoking.
    Thanks for sharing.

    :)

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  3. Morning27 August 2011 at 9:11 am

    your words linger and make one wonder what's next.
    a job well done,

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  4. Marja27 August 2011 at 3:43 pm

    lol love your wonderful words

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  5. Sue J27 August 2011 at 5:31 pm

    It's a bugger when you can't find your shoes :)

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  6. Helen28 August 2011 at 2:25 am

    You rascal! I looked at the title, the lovely image you chose, the first line you wrote and thought 'wow - Stafford has written a love story for the ages.'
    I'm left with a chuckle and a silly smile plastered on my face ~ not a bad way to begin my day.

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  7. Friko28 August 2011 at 3:37 am

    Great little ditty. Cheeky; I love it when sentimentality gets deflated by an unexpected ending.

    Should there be an additional 'my' in the last line?

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  8. Stafford Ray28 August 2011 at 3:57 am

    Fixed. Thanks Friko!

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  9. Snowbrush28 August 2011 at 7:04 am

    She's a practical woman who would make some man a practical wife.

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  10. Jen28 August 2011 at 1:36 pm

    If you wore them in the barn, their ruined anyway. Just get some new ones.

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  11. Windsmoke.28 August 2011 at 3:53 pm

    The last line made me smile :-).

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  12. Anonymous28 August 2011 at 11:41 pm

    You had me there going all Thomas Hardy at he start. But you just can't resist a punchline, can you? Hahaha. Love it!!

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  13. e.a.s. demers29 August 2011 at 3:23 pm

    Haha... wonderful :-)
    That last line took me by surprise....

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  14. Anonymous29 August 2011 at 3:43 pm

    That is very Staffordesque ;)

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