History in seashell.
Imagine the world as it was if you can,
when life on this planet so rampant began.
These sea gastropods
predated the gods
and squeezed in between, the emergence of Man.
Tess saw more seashells on the seashore at Magpie Tales.
Love your poem.. thanks for reading my blog; love to get readers from Australia.. I hope to visit. Daughter's boyfriendis from New Zealand and my son and family camped out for 12 weeks in Australia.. makes me want to go.jt
ReplyDeleteEmerged yes ~ evolved, not so certain. As always, I love your poetry, your wit, your mind.
ReplyDeleteSo, would you say then: the pods, the clods, the gods? Could fit the Bible story with a bit of stretching (if one is a believer of course -(like me;) Like your verse. Cheers
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem - leaves one to imagination and thinking ... have a lovely day!
ReplyDeleteFun one, as usual Stafford. :o)
ReplyDeleteGood verse reminder - enjoyed this a lot.
ReplyDeleteI love "squeezed in between, the emergence of Man". Lovely evolutionary tale.
ReplyDeleteWouldn't it have been amazing to witness? Cool magging!
ReplyDeletenice one Stafford - but I keep wanting it to read gastropubs - which perhaps reveals more about my weakness than anything else!
ReplyDelete"...when life on this planet so rampant began..." is a great image. I just hope that we don't make it "so rampant END." Excellent poem!
ReplyDeleteRick
lovely life
ReplyDeleteAlways a delight!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment on my blog. Your poem reflects your own universe. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteDear dear Stafford,
ReplyDeleteJust out of curiousity, did you love Biology in school?
By the way, my daughter was in Perth and Fremantle for a holiday...she loved it!
ReplyDeleteGreat take on the magpie. Enjoy it. Thanks for visiting my site.
ReplyDeleteI shell say this only once.....'Stafford, that was a neat little poem...!'
ReplyDeleteA revolutionary, evolutionary tale, and delightful. I think emergence as a word choice is masterful. Kudos!
ReplyDeleteHaha - those were the days :)
ReplyDeleteYes, "emergence" is great. The poem is wonderful. I have an impish little wish to teach this to some kid whose parents require Bible study, after which I would encourage the child to speak it loudly next Sunday at church service. :)
ReplyDeleteNice take on the prompt. I like the timeless message.
ReplyDeleteYes, how they made their presence seen and stayed on to this day. Will we see the end of time when they disappear?
ReplyDeleteWonderful little bit. Matchless word choice.
ReplyDeleteDaring here to say: better than the rock gods -- even the Beatles. A humble writer and more should be so well paid
!!
you always make everything rhyme.
ReplyDeleteperfect little summary
of the shell...
well done magpie.