Interesting, and as usual so "right" there. I liked it very much. And I think you are right about the innocence, but only a very wise man would know this.
Superb. The end of innocence... you create a very evocative image here in just a few words, and the final line kicked me right in the gut. Sign of a good poem. Word economy, imagery that elicits emotion. Bravo
Beautiful, metaphysical poem, Stafford. The mix of art and cosmology and theology is wonderful, and very poignant.
ReplyDeletestunning imagery,
ReplyDeletewhat an apt and fun read.
Interesting, and as usual so "right" there. I liked it very much. And I think you are right about the innocence, but only a very wise man would know this.
ReplyDeleteAnother very interesting photo!
ReplyDeleteLovely and bold at the same time. Great! :)
ReplyDeleteYou have nailed me! Yes, I am an incorrigible flirt! But a ** very ** selective flirt ~ with rules and reasonable expectations.
ReplyDelete"..held by a gravity
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Just one of the mysteries of mutual attraction. Nice one, Stafford.
and yet another beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteAmazing imagery my friend, perfection for Potluck Poetry, thanks so very much for your support!! xx
ReplyDeleteoh this is really good. Great amplification of a moment
ReplyDeleteYes, that is something we know...almost unpon meeting....nice Stafford...bkm
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ReplyDeleteInsightful poem beautifully written ... just wonderful!
ReplyDeletesteroids had me LOL!!! :o)
This was super neato!
ReplyDeletetrue- very true what you just said--
ReplyDeleteI do really like this poem Stafford - its all about gravity isn't it?
ReplyDeletemagic is like that
ReplyDeletebut is it real is the final question
never asked..and probably doesn't have to be asked
beautiful quiet
romantic poem Stafford
Superb. The end of innocence... you create a very evocative image here in just a few words, and the final line kicked me right in the gut. Sign of a good poem. Word economy, imagery that elicits emotion. Bravo
ReplyDeleteWarmest Salad
Luke
Ego Tripping
ReplyDeleteSo Easy
*Electric Vibes*
A Thrill For Two
Forbidden Fruit
So! What's The Problem
Just * Secret Moments*
T'ween Them and You
Okay Till * Ego Tripping*
Becomes * Addiction *
And * SHALLOW * Rules
Then All That * Zapping *
And Secret Mapping
With * OBSERVATION *
Brings Pain To * FOOLS *
May the force be with you :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much for your poetry potluck participation.
ReplyDeleteBEST Wishes!
The sinners are much more fun...
ReplyDeleteGreat one Stafford. You've def. captured the emotion.
ReplyDeleteStafford, just a note to say, I'll be away for a while. I'll be in touch when I return. Hope all is well.
ReplyDeletethis is so true...Flirting feels just like this. touching just make you keep touching.. MOMENTUM..
ReplyDeleteYou are a poet indeed Stafford...you have captured so much in few words as only poets can. Truly beautiful!!
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